DISQUS

Urban Thought · 1 year ago

Layla reminds me of my ex-girl. For me being skinny, it was only fitting that I was with a thick chick. At least that is what I was told.

I have to say I like the flow of the story. You have me thinking about my school years. Reflecting on how tough being young can be.

Great story. I'm feeling the character and the flow. Hopefully there is more to come of this.

Marvalus · 1 year ago

@Urban Thought - I can always count on you, Urban...thanks...

Layla has been chasing me...she is demanding to come to life, I think... :lol:

Mandy · 1 year ago

Hi,

I am a new reader. I love your blog, the organization, layout and most of all the insight, revelations and humor you share!

You are a talented writer. This piece reads so differently compared to your erotic story; it seems like you are really working on finding your voice, niche and audience. I wish you much success with this. Here are some thoughts for you. You should consider writing a coming of age novel. This would enable you to really work through the development of a character and enable you to focus on adult themes. You're gift as an erotic and scene writer should be explored.

I wish you the best on your new job, but don't neglect your writing talent. I want to see your book in print soon.

Jeannine · 1 year ago

This is more than a wonderfully written story by an extremely talented writer. I really feel Layla, only from the opposite side; I was too skinny and always one of the guys because I LOOKED like one of the guys. :eek: And, I actually had a roommate who stole my man. It all just seems so pitiful, doesn't it? But, in the end, I can say that my 20-year class reunion was an absolute blast. Guess what? You hope and dream and it does happen! May I please be first in line at your book signing? I can tell all my "friends" at the next reunion that I know you personally. Now, that's something!